Rain of Hopes

Behind mask of dark 
clouds; rain of hopes is present
just wait some moments

Every darkness, all the bad days end with a new beginning which is fresh like fresh pure rain. We should wait for just few moments....

This Haiku is the part of Haiku Heights for the prompt MASK


  1. Like for the metaphor used, and idea is expressed in great words!

  2. Angel SparklyMay 14, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    Very motivating haiku....Loved it mohinee :)

  3. Very true, in life as well as the weather.

  4. MagicalmysticalteacherMay 16, 2012 at 7:38 AM

    Yes, perhaps if we wait long enough, the mask will slip away...

    to Hide Your Fear

  5. ah, lovely breeze,
    wet grass shines happily
    dark clouds melted..

    I vouch for what you wrote Mohini..my life has been such a fantastic sequence of such interesting interruptions.. but then Sun Shines on my face.. Thanks..your haiku took my breath away...such positivity..

    Do visit me here to find some interesting haiku..


  6. cool, clouds are like masks for the sun, and the moon

    ugly man mask

  7. Kristjaan PannemanMay 18, 2012 at 5:16 PM

    Nicely composed haiku, loved reading it.

  8. Something like 'even the darkest clouds have a silver lining'. I like the optimism and hope in your words. Well penned. :)


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