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14 May 2012

Rain of Hopes



Behind mask of dark 
clouds; rain of hopes is present
just wait some moments


Every darkness, all the bad days end with a new beginning which is fresh like fresh pure rain. We should wait for just few moments....


This Haiku is the part of Haiku Heights for the prompt MASK

9 comments:

  1. Like for the metaphor used, and idea is expressed in great words!

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  2. Angel SparklyMay 14, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    Very motivating haiku....Loved it mohinee :)

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  3. Very true, in life as well as the weather.

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  4. MagicalmysticalteacherMay 16, 2012 at 7:38 AM

    Yes, perhaps if we wait long enough, the mask will slip away...

    Mask
    to Hide Your Fear

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  5. ah, lovely breeze,
    wet grass shines happily
    dark clouds melted..

    I vouch for what you wrote Mohini..my life has been such a fantastic sequence of such interesting interruptions.. but then Sun Shines on my face.. Thanks..your haiku took my breath away...such positivity..

    Do visit me here to find some interesting haiku..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/05/mirror-refuses.html#comment-form

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  6. cool, clouds are like masks for the sun, and the moon

    ugly man mask

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  7. Kristjaan PannemanMay 18, 2012 at 5:16 PM

    Nicely composed haiku, loved reading it.

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  8. Something like 'even the darkest clouds have a silver lining'. I like the optimism and hope in your words. Well penned. :)

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