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02 April 2012

I am Deserted


The very moment death arrives, when we realize that everything is over, now I have to leave the world, leaving everything here, though everything, everybody we love is with us, we are deserted by the life.




the death is arrived
all I love is around; still
I am deserted

This haiku is written as the part of Heights of Haiku April 2012, a 30 day 30 haiku writing challenge for the prompt 'Deserted' from Haiku Heights. Thanks Leo for the opportunity. 

14 comments:

  1. I find this haiku very moving because I have had this sense of desertion at times in my life. Thank you.

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  2. So profound..am amazed at your talent.

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 2, 2012 at 4:43 PM

    I often wonder what that moment will be like...

    Deserted Branches

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  4. I believe there is a void between life and death ..a journey which has to be undertaken by us based on what we have done or achieved on the Earth... Wonderful post indeed.

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  5. Very well written haiku ~ deep meaning ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. :( 
    I wish, that moment never comes!
    Very well penned down.

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  7. Thanks Kinara, really...that moment should never come.

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  8. Namaste Carol, welcome and thank you so much..:)

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  9. Thanks Amit, can't say exactly void or next life, death always makes me go in deep ...deep.

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  10. Magical Mystical Teacher, thanks...

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  11. Thanks Kajalji...:) Thanks for continuous motivation..

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  12. Ellecee, yes this feeling of desertion is really beyond words.

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  13. Kristjaan PannemanApril 3, 2012 at 4:21 AM

    Well done ... I sense some sadness in this one. Sadness and deserted are laying close to each other and that makes this feeling I think. 

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  14. Kristjaan, Namaste, thank you so much..yes, extreme sadness of being deserted.

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